Warriors Roundup: Novellas IV

In this installment of Warriors Roundup: our final three novellas.

Daisy’s Kin

“Who is Daisy?” I hear you cry.  Well, Daisy is a former barn cat who came to live with ThunderClan back in the New Prophecy and ever since has acting as a “nursery queen” – that is, a she-cat who lives full time in the clan’s nursery and helps new mothers with their kits.  This novella takes place during the events of the Broken Code.  The False Bramblestar has been outed, but during his reign two of Daisy’s kits were killed, leaving her with one surviving son, Mousewhisker. Her old mate from the barn Smokey shows up in ThunderClan, begging for help; his new mate, Coriander, is having a difficult kitting.  Daisy, along with Mousewhisker and Alderheart, go to assist Coriander; Coriander gives birth to two live kits, but dies shortly after.  Not wanting his kits to become kittypets, Smoky insists on bringing the newborns to SkyClan, who has a nursing mother who can care for them.  On the way to SkyClan, the five encounter the Sisters, who also have a nursing mother and take in the kits.  Later, once the kits are weaned, Smoky takes them back to his barn.  Daisy, unsure of her place in ThunderClan, decides to join him.  Later, several ThunderClan cats (including Mousewhisker) stop by the barn and ask Daisy to return, as they have a new mother who needs her help.  Daisy ultimately decides to return to ThunderClan, saying a tearful goodbye to Smoky and his kits but promising to visit.

Daisy was a great choice of a subject for a novella.  Warriors overwhelmingly follows cats in the two standard clan career paths, warrior and medicine cat, so it’s nice to get a PoV from a character with a more unusual role in the clan.  Daisy is also, I believe, only the fourth non-clanborn cat to get a full novella or Super Edition from their point of view after Firestar, Tree, and Mothwing.  One of the aspects of the Warriors world that I feel has been woefully underexplored is the perspective of outsiders.  Like I said in my Tigerheart’s Shadow roundup, most groups of outsiders are treated by the text as “defective Clans” in need of the assistance of the more sophisticated Clan cats.  While this has been alleviated somewhat by the introduction of the Sisters (who the text treats considerably less chauvinistically) we still rarely see the world through their point of view (the only example I can think of being Tree’s novella.)

Unfortunately, Daisy’s Kin doesn’t take full advantage of the strength of its concept.  The novella takes place during the Broken Code arc, four full arcs after Daisy first joined ThunderClan in the New Prophecy.  Daisy is already fully integrated into clan life and her brief sojourn back to the barn with Smoky is motivated by the same general dissatisfaction with post-False Bramblestar ThunderClan that motivated Graystripe to wander in his Super Edition.  There’s not necessarily anything wrong with this, but I can’t help but feel this novella would have been more interesting if it focused on Daisy’s initial struggles to integrate into ThunderClan that we caught a glimpse of in the New Prophecy.  The side plot of Mousewhisker and Smoky’s relationship wasn’t much of anything either; unfortunately parent-child relationships in Warriors are only treated as important when they’re relevant to the plot, so the fact that Mousewhisker and his siblings effectively had an absent father isn’t really something that has ever come up before.

Overall, this one was okay.

Spotfur’s Rebellion

“Who is Spotfur?” I hear you cry.  Well, Spotfur is a ThunderClan warrior who was a minor character in the Broken Code arc.  This novella starts with some filler: Spotpaw is a troublesome apprentice.  Spotpaw has a crush on Stempaw.  Spotpaw helps the clan.  Spotfur becomes a warrior.  Then, Bramblestar falls ill, dies, comes back, and starts acting strangely.  Unlike the rest of ThunderClan, Spotfur and her mate Stemleaf immediately pick up on the fact that post-resurrection Bramblestar is acting weird.  Together, they approach some other disaffected clanmates and plan a meeting of like-minded clan cats.  At this meeting, Rootpaw reveals that Bramblestar’s body is under the control of an impostor. Later, after the rebel group has grown considerably, they hold a meeting to determine what to do about the False Bramblestar.  Squirrelflight insists that the False Bramblestar should not be harmed, but Spotfur and Stemleaf decide he’s too dangerous to be left alive and plan to assassinate him without the approval of the rebel leadership.  Spotfur and Stemleaf’s group attack Bramblestar, but Bristlefrost (who had earlier promised Squirrelflight to protect Bramblestar) brings reinforcements for the imposter.  The assassination attempt fails, and Stemleaf is killed in the fighting.  With her mate dead at the hands of the impostor, Spotfur vows that one day the rebels will re-take ThunderClan

The nicest thing I can say about this novella is that it wasn’t boring.  Unfortunately, this is largely a testament of how interesting the Impostor plotline is as a concept, as this novella is almost entirely extraneous.  While Spotfur is a PoV we’ve never seen before, this novella doesn’t really provide any new information on ThunderClan under the Impostor.  The emotional center of this novella is supposed to be the relationship between Spotfur and Stemleaf, but Warriors has never been great at depicting interesting romantic relationships and this is no exception.  I’d say more if there was any more to say, but there just isn’t – this novella didn’t really feel like anything substantial.  Sorry, Spotfur fans.

Blackfoot’s Reckoning

“Who is Blackfoot?” I hear you cry.  Well, Blackfoot, later known as Blackstar, was the leader of ShadowClan from the New Prophecy through Bramblestar’s Storm.  It’s immediately following the battle at the end of the Prophecies Begin – Scourge is dead and the forest is saved from the threat of total annihilation by BloodClan.  With Evil Tigerstar dead, his deputy Blackfoot is next in line for leadership of ShadowClan.  Blackfoot and medicine cat Runningnose go the Moonstone so Blackfoot can receive his nine lives, but before he receives each life, he is forced to relive a moment from his past.  Most of these moments revolve around Blackfoot’s complicity in the crimes of the two Obviously Evil leaders he had been deputy under, Brokenstar and Evil Tigerstar.  Under Brokenstar, Blackfoot had done nothing to speak out against his leaders’ use of child soldiers and actively supported his attempts to drive WindClan from the forest and kidnap other clans’ kits to make more child soldiers.  Under Evil Tigerstar, Blackfoot had been complicit in his leaders’ attempts to eradicate half-clan cats: we get to see the “Evil Tigerstar tells Stonefur to kill two apprentices, Stonefur asks Leopardstar what she wants him to do, Leopardstar tells him to do what Tigerstar says” scene from Blackfoot’s perspective, in which Stonefur is ultimately killed by Blackfoot.  After being brought low by confronting the enormity of his past mistakes, Blackfoot’s final two visions are more comforting: one is of him caring for the sick cats of ShadowClan during the events of Tigerclaw’s Fury, and another is a collection of brief glimpses of potential futures.  After receiving his final vision and his final life, Blackfoot is acclaimed as the new leader of ShadowClan as Blackstar.

Blackfoot was another good choice for a subject.  The fact that StarClan was okay with Blackstar becoming clan leader when he was second-in-command to both Brokenstar and Evil Tigerstar is something that warranted exploration. 

Textually, Warriors seems to implicitly accept the Nuremberg defense as valid.  Nearly every arc, cats do terrible things at the orders of their leaders and are let off the hook for any real consequences because they were “just following orders” (see: followers of Clear Sky, Brokenstar, Evil Tigerstar, Darktail, the False Bramblestar, and Splashtail.)  To a certain extent I don’t have a problem with this.  Diegetically, clan society puts a high value on loyalty and the violence ordered by bad guy leaders rarely rises to the level of war crimes.  Also, practically speaking, if every cat who willingly followed Splashtail was exiled, RiverClan would have, like, four members right now.  That said, if there’s any cat for whom the Nuremberg defense shouldn’t work, it’s Blackfoot.  This cat was second in command to not one, but two different Obviously Evil clan leaders, both of whom very much did war crimes in which Blackfoot was very much complicit.  Blackfoot personally went to kidnap ThunderClan kits to use as child soldiers and executed Stonefur on Evil Tigerstar’s orders for the crime of having the wrong parents.  Blackstar is a war criminal, even more so than Leopardstar.  I don’t think this has ever been addressed in the main series – if I’m remembering correctly, in the beginning of the New Prophecy Blackstar is leader of ShadowClan and everybody is just kind of okay with it. 

So, how does this novella square that circle?  According to the text, Blackfoot is just incredibly credulous and incredibly loyal.  Blackstar loves his leaders, he never questions their decisions, and he implicitly believes every obvious, self-serving lie they feed him.  He is the opposite of genre savvy; he seems completely oblivious to the fact that he’s in the Slytherin of Warrior Cats.  Only in the middle of his nine lives ceremony does he stop and think “wait a minute, did Brokenstar lie to me about Raggedstar’s death?”  Yes, Blackfoot, your Obviously Evil clan leader wasn’t entirely honest with you about the circumstances of his predecessor’s death, an event to which he was the only witness and through which he stood the most to gain.

All that said, I get it.  A 100 page novella was never going to be enough to adequately cover a personality change from “eager participant in war crimes” to “good leader,” so some kind of cop-out to the first part was going to be necessary, and of the available options “he was just too stupid to realize what he was doing was wrong” is probably the best we could have gotten.  It’s not even entirely out of character considering how, in Power of Three, Blackstar gets fooled into forsaking StarClan by obvious charlatan Sol.  I also just think it’s funny to imagine Blackstar as a cat whose moral compass is completely overwritten by any authority figure telling him to do something.

Overall, I liked this novella.  Despite his obvious faults, I like Blackstar and nine lives ceremonies are always fun to see.

Closing Thoughts

All in all, an unexceptional batch of novellas.  Blackfoot’s Reckoning was the best of the three, and it was just good.

And…that’s it.  As of the date of this roundup going live, Blackfoot’s Reckoning is the final published Warriors novella.  Novellas fill an interesting niche in the Warriors franchise – conceptually they have to be interesting enough that they don’t feel entirely superfluous, but not so interesting that their concepts can’t be fully explored in their very limited page count, and not every novella is able to make it work.  Out of the novellas, I’d say my favorites are, in no particular order:

  • Dovewing’s Silence
  • Mapleshade’s Vengeance
  • Ravenpaw’s Farewell
  • Pinestar’s Choice
  • Mothwing’s Secret

And my least favorites are, in no particular order:

  • Hollyleaf’s Story
  • Cloudstar’s Journey
  • Thunderstar’s Echo
  • Tawnypelt’s Clan
  • Pebbleshine’s Kits

Next up: our final batch of Super Editions, including Stormclan’s Folly, which releases next week.  What will I think of the first new release since I’ve started my Warriors journey?  Read and find out…

Little Projects: Intro

Years ago, I saw a screencap of a Tumblr post that said something to the effect of, “if you leave a man alone for five minutes, he will invent a little project to keep himself occupied.”  I can’t find this post anymore, and frankly it might have been a tweet instead of a Tumblr post, but the point is, the sentiment stuck with me because it’s true: many men (myself included) love their little projects.

Beyond simply arriving at an end project, the goal of most of my Little Projects is to learn something.  Most of the time, there are great resources out there on the web for whatever Little Project I’m working on, but for my more esoteric projects often my only recourse is good ol’ trial and error.  Therefore, in addition to the usual thoughts and musings, I’ve decided to start documenting my Little Projects here on Snake Oil Direct in the hopes of passing on my knowledge to anyone who could benefit from it. And just because I like showing off.

Warriors Roundup: A Starless Clan

It’s been a long journey, but we’re finally here: the final completed Warriors arc to date, A Starless Clan.  Let’s take a look:

Plot Summary

This arc’s three PoV characters are: Frostpaw, RiverClan medicine cat apprentice; Flamepaw, ThunderClan warrior apprentice; and Sunbeam, ShadowClan warrior.  A short time has passed since the conclusion of the Broken Code, and the Clans are still debating the proposed changes to the Warrior Code.  Ultimately, the changes discussed in the Broken Code roundup are implemented; most notably, provisions for legal clan-swapping and democratically removing a clan leader from power are added.  In RiverClan, Mistystar and Reedwhisker both die unexpectedly, plunging the clan into a succession crisis.  As Mothwing has no connection to StarClan, it becomes Frostpaw’s responsibility to interpret StarClan’s will as to who the next leader should be.  Frostpaw’s choice is Curlfeather, her mother; however, on the way to the Moonpool to receive her nine lives, Curlfeather is torn apart by dogs, with her final words to Frostpaw being “trust no cat.”  Meanwhile, in ThunderClan, Flamepaw is having a rough time – long story short, he feels like everyone is always comparing him to his famous ancestor Firestar instead of seeing him as his own cat, which ultimately leads him to reject his warrior name Flameheart.  Instead, he is given the name Nightheart (he’s a black cat, so it’s a more fitting name anyway.) 

Back in RiverClan, Frostpaw’s second choice for clan leader Owlnose turns out to be far too timid and indecisive; realizing he’s not cut out for clan leadership, he steps down before receiving his nine lives.  At the next Gathering, RiverClan’s dysfunction is immediately apparent; Tigerstar, concerned that RiverClan is on the brink of a total collapse that would threaten regional stability, conducts a special military operation to install his deputy Cloverfoot as temporary RiverClan leader until they can get their act together.  Meanwhile, Nightheart, fed up with his mistreatment by ThunderClan, decides to join ShadowClan to be with his crush Sunbeam, whom he had gone on a brief, barely relevant quest with earlier in the arc.

Tigerstar’s invasion of RiverClan sets off a diplomatic crisis among the clans; Leafstar of SkyClan wants to immediately mobilize against ShadowClan, but she lacks the support of WindClan and ThunderClan.  Frostpaw, despondent at her inability to choose the right leader for RiverClan, realizes with horror that what she thought were messages from StarClan were just normal dreams, and decides to abandon her medicine cat training.  Meanwhile, Nightheart takes part in the three ordeals necessary to join ShadowClan.  After realizing his loyalty still lies with ThunderClan, Nightheart intentionally fails his final ordeal and returns to ThunderClan.  Fortunately for him, Sunbeam decides to go with him.

Frostpaw finally receives an actual vision from StarClan that tells her that former RiverClan deputy Reedwhisker was murdered.  On her way to consult with other medicine cats, she is attacked and left for dead; she survives, and with Nightheart goes on a quest to find a group of cats who live in a park.  Using meditation techniques learned from the Park Cats, Frostpaw deduces the source of RiverClan’s recent misfortunes: her own mother, Curlfeather.  Here’s the cliff notes of Curlfeather’s evil plan:

  1. Groom Frostpaw from birth into becoming a medicine cat apprentice
  2. Arrange Reedwhisker’s death
  3. Since Mothwing has no connection with StarClan, Frostpaw will be the one to interpret signs from StarClan regarding who the new deputy should be
  4. Manipulate Frostpaw into recommending Curlfeather as deputy
  5. Become clan leader when Mistystar dies (any day now)

Frostpaw also deduces that Curlfeather must have had an accomplice, Splashtail, who must have double-crossed her by luring dogs to attack her before she could get her nine lives. She also realizes Splashtail must have been the cat who tried to kill her.  Frostpaw and Nightheart return to the clans only to find that, in her absence, RiverClan has acclaimed Splashtail as their new leader.  Frostpaw tries to warn the other clan leaders that Splashtail is Obviously Evil, but nobody believes her.  Fearing Splashtail’s wrath, Frostpaw takes refuge in ShadowClan.  Splashtail turns out to be just as terrible as Frostpaw suspected, openly defying StarClan by refusing to accept their nine lives and ruling his clanmates through fear and threats of violence. Splashtail invades and conquers ShadowClan, which causes the other clans to unite against RiverClan.  Splashtail almost escapes to start a new, better RiverClan, but is killed by Frostpaw, who is grievously wounded.  Frostpaw remains suspended between life and death for weeks but eventually returns to the world of the living.  Frostpaw appoints Icewing as the true heir of Mistystar, and she finally receives her full medicine cat name as Frostdawn.  Oh, and Nightheart and Sunbeam are expecting kits.

Our Villains

Warriors arcs live or die based on the quality of their villains.  A Starless Clan has three main villains: Curlfeather, mastermind behind the original plan to take over RiverClan; Splashtail, Curlfeather’s lackey who double-crosses her and usurps her plan for himself; and Berryheart, Sunbeam’s mother who is so opposed to the idea of changing the Warrior Code that she allies with Splashtail to oust Tigerstar.

As the primary villain for this arc, Splashtail is okay.  He does all the “villainous clan leader” greatest hits: rules through fear, disregards the safety of his clan members, murders his subordinates for questioning him, aims to conquer the other clans, etc.  In the early days of his leadership (and before) he’s shown to be a deft manipulator, convincing the other clan leaders to disregard Frostpaw’s warnings about him.  Unfortunately for him, Curlfeather’s ghost isn’t happy about the whole “being murdered” thing and starts tormenting Splashtail, which causes him to quickly descend into madness.

Curlfeather is only revealed as a villain after her death, so her villainy all happens off-screen, in flashbacks, or as a ghost.  As mentioned above, her ghost torments Splashtail, taunting him with the inevitability of his own downfall and the fact that he will be joining her in Cat Hell.

Berryheart is an interesting one.  She isn’t mentioned in my arc plot summary because all of the plotlines she’s involved in are tertiary to the main RiverClan conflict, but to briefly summarize: she doesn’t like the idea of cats changing clans; she makes Nightheart’s life miserable when he moves to ShadowClan to be with her daughter Sunbeam; she tries to oust Tigerstar using the new “remove a leader” rules in the Warrior Code but is unsuccessful and is exiled from ShadowClan; she joins RiverClan and becomes Splashtail’s deputy; she tries to take over ShadowClan after Splashtail conquers it; Splashtail kills her for her duplicity.  She’s fine.  She’s an overbearing mother archetype, which is a role she fills well.  Her primary role in the story is to provide conflict for Sunbeam, which, again, is something she does well.

Imagine There’s No StarClan

One thing that Splashtail and Curlfeather have in common is their lack of regard towards StarClan.  Both are disillusioned by StarClan’s apparent inability to help the living clans.  Splashtail points out, not incorrectly, that StarClan didn’t do anything to prevent Darktail from taking over RiverClan or Mistystar from siding with the False Bramblestar.  They are not atheists per se; both acknowledge the existence of StarClan but are critical of the role that StarClan plays in the affairs of the living. 

Curlfeather’s lack of respect for StarClan is somewhat cynical, as she is clearly willing to accept their nine lives.  Splashtail, on the other hand, is a true hater: he doesn’t want StarClan’s nine lives, as he thinks it will give them some control over him, and when he is pressured into accepting them anyway, he and his fake medicine cat go the Moonpool, openly mock StarClan, don’t do the ceremony, and just tell everyone they did when they get back.

Splashtail not accepting his extra lives is something that really sticks out to me in this arc.  It would be easy to say that it’s just a plot contrivance such that he only needs to be killed once instead of nine times before being gone for good.  However, if the goal of the writing team was to make it so Splashtail could die before the end of the arc without needing to be killed nine separate times, there were several other routes available to them, the three obvious ones being:

  1. Splashtail tries to receive his nine lives, but StarClan doesn’t give them to him (happened to Nightstar in the first arc)
  2. Splashtail receives his nine lives, but they are removed after he is ousted from RiverClan using the new “remove a leader” rules in the Warrior Code
  3. Splashtail receives his nine lives, but receives wounds so grievous he loses multiple lives at once (happened to Evil Tigerstar in the first arc)

None of these three options seem any more contrived than Splashtail just deciding he doesn’t want his nine lives, so I have to conclude that his rejection was chosen by the writers for its character implications, which I like.

The ironic thing about Splashtail and Curlfeather’s disdain for StarClan’s interference with the affairs of the living is just how little StarClan interferes in this arc.  StarClan does not send any signs regarding who should be the new leader of RiverClan; the text is clear that everything Frostpaw thought were signs were either planted by Curlfeather/Splashtail or just normal dreams.  StarClan does not interfere with Tigerstar’s invasion of RiverClan; that situation is resolved by mediation from Tree.  StarClan does not warn the other clan leaders that Splashtail is bad news; that responsibility falls to Frostpaw, who argues from her deductions and observations rather than omens and signs.  The only things StarClan does all arc are show Frostpaw Reedwhisker’s murder, guide her to the Park Cats, and warn her of some barely-relevant danger to WindClan. 

Other Comments

  • Why’d They Have to Go and Make It All Political? Genre-wise, Warriors as a series tends to fluctuate between adventure fantasy and political fantasy.  This arc and the last arc are two sides of the same coin: The Broken Code was the quintessential fantasy adventure arc, and A Starless Clan is the quintessential political fantasy arc.  Personally, I enjoy the political fantasy side of Warriors, so I greatly enjoyed this arc.
  • Bramblestar Is Over Party: The fate of ThunderClan’s leadership is a major subplot in the first half of this arc.  Essentially, Bramblestar was so traumatized by the events of the Broken Code that he effectively became a pacifist incapable of making difficult choices.  In many ways, this reminds me of his grandfather, Pinestar – both are clan leaders who have grown disillusioned by the violence inherent in Clan society.  Ultimately, Bramblestar decides to step down, becoming Brambleclaw once more and making his mate Squirrelstar clan leader.  Instead of Lionblaze, who had been her acting deputy during the Broken Code, Squirrelstar makes his daughter-in-law Ivypool her deputy.  I like this; Lionblaze seems incredibly dense and Ivypool is a far more interesting character.  Of course, this doesn’t really address the criticism that ThunderClan’s leadership is a clique of Firestar’s kin, but honestly most of ThunderClan is Firestar’s kin at this point and at least Ivypool isn’t his direct descendant (she’s the granddaughter of his nephew/daughter-in-law of his grandson)
  • Nightheart x Sunbeam: I know it may not seem like it based on this roundup, but the relationship between Nightheart and Sunbeam is a major plot throughout the entire arc.  I just find the Frostpaw plot way more interesting.
  • Mothwing: Mothwing, as Frostpaw’s mentor, plays a large role in the events of this arc.  One might think that Mothwing would be positioned as a foil to Splashtail; Splashtail is openly disdainful of StarClan, and Mothwing’s relationship with StarClan is famously fraught.  Unfortunately, this isn’t something that’s explored explicitly.  Implicitly, Mothwing’s lack of faith in StarClan is okay because she still acts like she believes in StarClan: she does the ceremonies, acknowledges the importance of StarClan’s guidance even though she doubts their actual wisdom, etc.  StarClan is okay with Mothwing because she doesn’t do anything to undermine their influence on the Clans; Splashtail is only a problem because he isn’t so diplomatic.
  • Can’t Get No Respect: After conducting his illegal and widely condemned invasion of RiverClan, Tigerstar tries to improve his diplomatic situation through the use of humor.  First, on a visit to RiverClan camp:

The sun was gone, the streaks of scarlet in the sky already fading, by the time Tigerstar rushed into the camp. “Sorry, sorry,” he panted as he leaped onto the Highstump. “Which cat put the RiverClan camp so far away from ShadowClan?”

His attempt at a joke was met with icy silence.

Tigerstar paused for a moment, as if he was waiting for a response that never came, then gave a tiny shrug and continued. (Shadow, Chapter 7)

Later, during a tense gathering:

“I promise that my only purpose is to protect RiverClan and help them through this difficult time,” Tigerstar continued. “I have no intention of becoming their leader myself. I don’t even like fish,” he added. No cat reacted to the feeble joke. (Shadow, Chapter 17)

Oh, Tigerstar, you lovable rascal, you.

  • Unintentional Body Horror: So, after Frostpaw is attacked by Splashtail and left for dead at the end of Shadow, she ultimately ends up being treated by a Twoleg veterinarian.  When Frostpaw wakes up, she finds that in addition to treating her injuries, the Twolegs have left her with a mysterious scar that we, as readers, recognize as a spay scar.  Spaying/neutering is something that has come up in the series before – one of Firestar’s motivations for initially joining ThunderClan was wanting to avoid being neutered – but I think this is the first time it’s ever happened to a Clan cat.  This makes me incredibly uncomfortable.  I’m a strong believer in spaying/neutering your pets, but Warrior Cats characters are anthropomorphized to the point of being basically a human in all but name, so this reads uncomfortably like a human being involuntarily sterilized by aliens.  And then, of course, nothing comes of it: it’s never mentioned again and Frostpaw ultimately goes back to her medicine cat training, meaning she’s not allowed to have kits anyway.
  • Dark Forest Long Game: Way back in Omen of the Stars, Icewing was one of the cats who trained in the Dark Forest.  This means that, as of the end of A Starless Clan, three of the five current clan leaders are Dark Forest trainees (Tigerstar, Harestar, and Icestar,) and that could go up to four out of five if Squirrelstar dies or retires now that Ivypool is her deputy.

Conclusion

Following immediately on the heels of the very strong The Broken Code arc, A Starless Clan more than lived up to expectations.  Clearly, the Warriors team can still put out solid arcs.  A Starless Clan was not without its shortcomings, but as far as Warriors goes, I’m hard-pressed to think of an arc that better suits my particular tastes and preferences.  A Starless Clan is my new favorite Warriors arc.  Here’s my ranking of all arcs:

  1. A Starless Clan
  2. The Broken Code
  3. Power of Three
  4. The Prophecies Begin
  5. A Vision of Shadows
  6. Dawn of the Clans
  7. The New Prophecy
  8. Omen of the Stars

A Starless Clan may be the latest completed arc, but we’re not quite done with Warriors yet.  In addition to enough novellas and Super Editions for a roundup each, we also have the first book of the currently in-progress arc, Changing Skies…

Warriors Roundup: Super Editions V

This week, on Warriors Roundup: our fifth batch of Super Editions. Let’s see what we’ve got…

Graystripe’s Vow

In a first for Warriors, Graystripe’s Vow is split into two plots, referred to as “Then” and “Now.”  While this Super Edition alternates between plots from chapter to chapter, for ease of understanding I’ll summarize them independently.

The Then plot takes place in the old forest territories, between the first and second arcs and contemporaneously with Firestar’s Quest.  Firestar and Sandstorm have gone off on their quest to reform SkyClan, leaving deputy Graystripe in charge of ThunderClan.  Graystripe’s leadership is questioned by several cats who think he’s unqualified or disloyal, due to the whole “joining RiverClan for a bit to be with my dead mate’s kits” thing.  Complicating matters further, Firestar has instructed Graystripe to not tell anybody why he’s left beyond saying he’s “on a mission from StarClan” as to keep the existence of SkyClan (and the other clans’ complicity in their exile) a secret.  A delegation from ShadowClan arrives to warn ThunderClan that they’ve scented BloodClan on the ThunderClan border.  “Who is BloodClan?” I hear you cry.  Well, to make a long story short, they’re a group of street cats from Twolegplace that Evil Tigerstar brought in as muscle to force WindClan and ThunderClan into joining his conglomerate clan, TigerClan; after BloodClan’s leader Scourge killed Evil Tigerstar, the four forest clans faced BloodClan in battle, killing Scourge and scattering BloodClan.  Anyway, with Scourge dead, the BloodClan remnants have united under a new leader, Fury, who has set her sights on ThunderClan’s territory.  While on patrol, Graystripe is attacked by BloodClan and nearly killed, but he is allowed to escape by a BloodClan cat named Gremlin.  Gremlin doesn’t like how things operate in BloodClan and is willing to become a double-agent if her and her brother are allowed to join ThunderClan.  Graystripe eventually convinces the rest of ThunderClan to go along with this plan.  Using intel from Gremlin, ThunderClan successfully fights off a BloodClan ambush. After the battle, a grievously wounded Fury agrees to leave ThunderClan alone in exchange for medical treatment; meanwhile, Gremlin decides to try her luck as a kittypet instead of joining ThunderClan.  Firestar returns from his quest, and Graystripe concludes he never wants to be clan leader; he isn’t comfortable with making so many important decisions.

The Now plot takes place during the Broken Code arc, specifically during Book 4.  The False Bramblestar has been identified as Ashfur; Squirrelflight is acting leader and Lionblaze is acting deputy.  Tensions within ThunderClan are running incredibly high due to several factors – the divide between the former False Bramblestar loyalists and rebels; the continued silence of StarClan; all clan leadership positions being monopolized by Firestar’s kin – and eventually several cats decide to leave ThunderClan on a “wander.” Among these cats is Graystripe, who is mourning the loss of his longtime mate Millie (died between A Vision of Shadows and The Broken Code) and is unsure of his place in modern ThunderClan.  The wandering cats split up, with Graystripe heading to visit the Tribe of Rushing Water.  There, Graystripe meets up with Stormfur, his son by his first dead mate Silverstream, who has been living with the Tribe since The New Prophecy.  Graystripe then decides to return to the old forest territories to visit the Moonstone, the means through which the clans communed with StarClan prior to the move to the lake.  On his way there, he encounters WarriorClan – a group of overeager young kittypets who, upon hearing stories about the old forest clans, decided to start their own clan.  WarriorClan, under the leadership of Monkeystar, insists on coming along with Graystripe.  Graystripe visits Barley, and when he arrives at the Moonstone, it is struck by lighting and destroyed.  Graystripe then meets Fang, Gremlin’s son, who asks for his help in rescuing some other cats from a Twoleg with a hoarding problem.  Graystripe, Fang, and WarriorClan succeed in rescuing the cats.  Most of the rescued cats agree to join WarriorClan, which establishes a territory in the old RiverClan territory.  Monkeystar makes Fang her deputy, and a cat named Petunia becomes WarriorClan’s medicine cat.  Graystripe returns across the mountains to ThunderClan’s territory, believing that despite how it may have changed, ThunderClan is where he belongs.

I think splitting this Super Edition into the Then and Now plots was a good choice; while both plots are interesting, I don’t think they would be enough to carry an entire Super Edition on their own.  Focusing on ThunderClan while Firestar and Sandstorm were off reforming SkyClan was a good pick for a Super Edition because it gives us a very manageable number of recognizable characters to work with.  One big issue with Warriors in recent arcs has been the sheer number of cats in the clans – the Allegiances section for Lost Stars, the first book of the Broken Code, lists 48 members of ThunderClan compared to only 25 in Into the Wild, the first book of the first arc – not to mention there are now four additional clans instead of three.  The large number of cats makes it very difficult to keep track of who’s who, especially since many cats barely get any characterization.  A lot of the Then plot of Graystripe’s Vow has to do with Graystripe trying to convince ThunderClan to respect him as leader and trust Gremlin, and because there are only 21 members of ThunderClan in Graystripe’s Vow (19 if you exclude Firestar/Sandstorm) we as readers know exactly who opposes Graystripe and why.  All that being said, the Then plot was fairly standard Warriors fare – respectable, but nothing earth-shattering.

I found the Now plot to be far more enjoyable.  It starts off very slowly – the first several chapters of the Now plot is essentially just Graystripe moping about how he’s miserable and ThunderClan sucks now.  Once Graystripe leaves on his wander, things pick up quickly.  In the brief period before they split up, the wandering cats have a fun dynamic – Thornclaw is a grumpy, no-nonsense old guy; Flipclaw is only there because he has the hots for Flywhisker, who rejects him immediately; Snaptooth thinks the Flipclaw/Flywhisker dynamic is hilarious (he’s right); and Graystripe doesn’t really know why he even left. The Tribe is not nearly as obnoxious in this book as they have been in the past, probably because the story doesn’t linger there too long and the emotional weight of Graystripe’s reunion with Stormfur. 

And then WarriorClan enters the picture.  I love WarriorClan; they are by far the best part of this Super Edition.  In their own words:

“So you’re all kittypets?” [Graystripe] asked.

“Well, yes…” Monkeystar sounded reluctant to admit it. “We’re kittypets when we’re with our housefolk, but when we get out of our gardens – and that’s most of the day – we’re fierce warriors.  Except that Fireface’s housefolk feed him at midday, so he goes home for that.”  (Graystripe’s Vow, pg. 206-207)

This is a type of character that I’m personally very fond of – the overly-enthusiastic fanboy who doesn’t quite understand the source material.  Graystripe is seemingly a fan as well considering how fondly he treats WarriorClan despite their obnoxious habit of never leaving him alone. 

What I think is most fascinating about this book’s treatment of WarriorClan is how it leaves them off.  In the main text, Graystripe leaves WarriorClan as sort of an unofficial clan.  They have a leader, a deputy, a medicine cat, a camp and a territory – all essential elements of a functioning clan.  What they lack, however, is any connection with StarClan: the medicine cat Petunia is just a cat who is good at healing, and Monkeystar (presumably) does not have nine lives.  Well, this book, like every Super Edition since Bluestar’s Prophecy, contains an “Exclusive WARRIORS Comic” (side note: these comics used to be called “manga” for some reason.)  These comics are typically 10- or 12-page bonus stories that act as epilogues to the main Super Edition, often covering the main character’s death (see: Crookedstar’s Promise, Tallstar’s Revenge, Moth Flight’s Vision.)  The comic in this Super Edition follows WarriorClan.  To make a long story short, Petunia, WarriorClan’s medicine cat, is missing her Twoleg, so Monkeystar has her go to the shattered fragments of the Moonstone, where she meets the spirit of Gremlin.  To me, the implications of this are fascinating.  For one, it’s clear that Gremlin isn’t in StarClan, but one of the alternate afterlives for non-Clan cats – Gremlin never officially joined a clan, and she mentions being in whatever afterlife she’s in with another non-Clan cat.  Therefore, we can infer that non-clan afterlives are able to communicate with the living the same way that StarClan does.  This is consistent with what we’ve seen in past books; the afterlife for Tribe of Rushing Water cats, the Tribe of Endless Hunting, has been established to be able to communicate with the leader of the Tribe, the Teller of the Pointed Stones.  What is not clear, however, is what else non-Clan afterlives can do.  Can Gremlin’s afterlife see the future, like StarClan?  Can they grant Monkeystar nine lives, like StarClan?  If not, will they be able to in the future?  We know from Dawn of the Clans and the Moth Flight’s Vision Super Edition that StarClan is not something that existed a priori; rather, it came into being as a direct result of the actions of the early settlers in the old forest territories.  Will the dead of WarriorClan eventually develop into their own StarClan franchise, one with the same fabulous mystic powers of the main StarClan?  We can only hope that one day, the answers will be revealed in a Monkeystar Super Edition.

Overall, I really enjoyed Graystripe’s Vow.  It’s one of the better Super Editions so far.

Leopardstar’s Honor

“Who is Leopardstar?” I hear you cry.  Well, Leopardstar was the leader of RiverClan between Crookedstar and Mistystar; in book terms, that means from the last book of The Prophecies Begin to about the midpoint of Omen of the Stars.  The first parts of this Super Edition are what we’ve come to expect from a biographical Super Edition: Leopardkit is believed to have a great destiny; she becomes an apprentice, then a warrior; several cats close to her die.  The book is then effectively a recap of the Prophecies Begin from RiverClan’s perspective.   After Oakheart is killed in a battle over Sunningrocks, Crookedstar makes Leopardfur deputy.  As deputy, Leopardfur repeatedly butts heads with Crookedstar over what she perceives as his lack of aggressiveness – both acquiescing to demands from Brokenstar and allowing ThunderClan to retake Sunningrocks.  Over the course of several Gatherings, Leopardfur strikes up a friendship with ThunderClan deputy Tigerclaw, who admires her spirit and clearly has big ideas for when he becomes clan leader.  Several other first arc events happen – a battle over WindClan; a flood; Graystripe and Silverstream’s Forbidden Romance; a fire which destroys ThunderClan’s camp – and eventually Tigerclaw becomes leader of ShadowClan as Evil Tigerstar.  After Crookedstar dies, Evil Tigerstar convinces Leopardstar to unite her clan with ShadowClan, creating TigerClan.  Evil Tigerstar initially pays lip service to the idea of joint leadership in TigerClan, but it’s soon clear that he will tolerate no dissent from Leopardstar.  After being forced to assent to the murder of her own deputy for the crime of being half-clan, Leopardstar realizes she’s made a terrible mistake.  When Evil Tigerstar plans to attack WindClan and ThunderClan, Leopardstar orders her former RiverClan cats to switch sides as soon as the battle starts; however, before the battle can start, Scourge, the leader of BloodClan (whom Tigerstar has brought in as an ally) kills Evil Tigerstar.  The book ends with Leopardstar preparing to lead RiverClan into the final battle against BloodClan.

To start off, I’d like to look at what is, to me, Leopardstar’s most memorable scene in the entire series.  This scene comes about halfway through the Darkest Hour, the final book of the first arc.  Evil Tigerstar, sitting on a literal pile of bones, orders Stonefur, half-clan deputy of RiverClan, to kill Stormpaw and Featherpaw, two half-clan apprentices.  Here’s how the subsequent exchange goes in the Darkest Hour:

The blue-gray warrior [Stonefur] had turned to face Leopardstar.  “I take orders from you,” he growled.  “You must know this is wrong.  What do you want me to do?”

For a heartbeat Leopardstar looked uncertain, and again Firestar began to hope that she would take a stand against Tigerstar and stop the destruction of her Clan.  But he had underestimated the strength of her ambition, and her misguided faith that Tigerstar offered an invincible future.  “These are difficult times,” she meowed at last. “As we fight for survival we must be able to count on every one of our Clan mates. There is no room for divided loyalties.  Do as Tigerstar tells you.” (The Darkest Hour, pg. 168-169)

From this scene, it’s clear that, at least from Firestar’s perspective, Leopardstar is perfectly on board with what Tigerstar is doing.  Sure, she may hesitate at ordering Stonefur to obey Tigerstar, but her ambition and her faith in Tigerstar lead her to relent.  Leopardstar’s Honor, however, offers a different perspective:

Stonefur was battered and starved from his confinement, but as he turned his gaze to Leopardstar, his eyes seemed to bore right through her.  “I take orders from you,” he growled darkly.  “You must know this is wrong. What do you want me to do?”

For a moment, Leopardstar could only stare at her deputy.  What do you want me to do?  What could she say? She risked a glance at Tigerstar, and was chilled by the hatred in his eyes.  Not only for Stonefur, but for her.  If I say no, she wondered, how much longer will I be alive to protect my Clan?

“These are difficult times,” she rasped finally, struggling to keep her voice steady.  What would Tigerstar say?  She felt sick.  “As we fight for survival we must be able to count on every one of our Clanmates.  There is no room for divided loyalties.  Do as Tigerstar tells you.” StarClan, forgive me. (Leopardstar’s Honor, pg. 2)

This excerpt paints a very different picture.  Stonefur is correct – Leopardstar does know that ordering him to murder two innocent apprentices is wrong, and she desperately doesn’t want to do it.  What leads her to give the order is not ambition, it’s fear – fear that, if she defies him, Evil Tigerstar will kill her, and then she won’t be able to protect RiverClan from him.  Never mind that her decisions are the reason why they need protection in the first place.

I’m not bringing this scene up to accuse the Warriors franchise of contradicting itself (StarClan forbid that ever happens.)  Nor am I bringing it up to demonstrate the tendency of these biography-style Super Editions to treat their subjects with nigh-hagiographic deference.   I am bringing it up primarily to point out that, even with the most charitable framing possible, Leopardstar is a war criminal.  No matter how she tries to justify it to herself, in this scene Leopardstar is enabling Evil Tigerstar’s genocide against half-clan cats.  She may be a regretful collaborator, but she’s a collaborator nonetheless. 

This is why I personally find Leopardstar so fascinating.  Warriors has this tendency to make its protagonists moral paragons.  Sure, they may break the Warrior Code on occasion, but usually only the parts of the Warrior Code that we as readers recognize as nonsense anyway.   We don’t often get protagonists who are just straight-up bad dudes – the only prior examples that come to mind are Mapleshade and Evil Tigerstar in their novellas and Clear Sky in the first half of Dawn of the Clans – so we never get that subset of bad dudes, “bad dudes who feel bad about it.”  Which is a shame, because “bad dudes who feel bad about it” is one of my favorite kinds of characters.

As explained in the plot summary, most of this Super Edition is spent effectively recapping the first arc from RiverClan’s perspective.  I don’t necessarily have an issue with this – at this point it’s been over three months since I’ve read the first arc, so I don’t mind a bit of rehashing.  Leopardfur’s sideplots – mostly occupied by her relationships with her potential mate Frogleap, her father Mudfur, and her clan leader Crookedstar – are okay, but nothing special.  Then, there’s Leopardstar’s time as a collaborator of Evil Tigerstar, which I love.  Unfortunately, this part of the book is very brief, and the book ends shortly after Evil Tigerstar’s death and before Leopardstar has really had time to reflect on and atone for her crimes, which I found a little disappointing.  I think the only Warriors media where Leopardstar confronts her past sins is the A Shadow in RiverClan graphic novel – maybe I’ll cover that in a future roundup.

In conclusion, a middle-of-the-road Super Edition.  The parts that I liked, I liked a lot, but most of it was nothing special.

Onestar’s Confession

Onestar’s Confession, like Leopardstar’s Honor, is a biography-style Super Edition that follows a clan leader of questionable moral character.  During Onepaw’s apprenticeship, two young kittypets join WindClan – Tansypaw, aka Melody, who doesn’t adapt well to clan life and returns to becoming a kittypet, and Brushpaw, who dies from infected wounds following a skirmish with ShadowClan.  This convinces Tallstar (and Onepaw/Onewhisker) that kittypets are never suited for clan life.  Nevertheless, Onewhisker enjoys hanging out with the local kittypets, especially a pretty she-cat named Smoke.  Much later, as Twolegs are beginning to destroy the forest territories, Onewhisker takes his former apprentice Whitetail as his mate.  He breaks things off with Smoke, but she’s already pregnant with his kits.  As the clans are preparing to leave the forest territories for the lake, Smoke tracks Onewhisker down one last time and makes him promise that he’ll come back for her and his son Darkkit, threatening that if he doesn’t, she’ll teach Darkkit to hate him and the clans.  The clans successfully arrive at the lake territories, and WindClan goes through a succession crisis when Tallstar on his deathbed strips Mudclaw of the deputyship and appoints Onewhisker in his place.  After Mudclaw is killed and Onestar is recognized as the legitimate leader of WindClan, Onestar decides that he can’t maintain his friendship with Firestar and begins intentionally antagonizing ThunderClan.  Much later, shortly after the events of Crowfeather’s Trial, Onestar remembers that he promised Smoke he’d come back for her, so he finally journeys back to the old forest territories.  When he arrives, he realizes he’s too late; Smoke is dead, and Darktail is nowhere to be found, but based on descriptions from local kittypets who remember him, he’s Obviously Evil.  Much later, Onestar’s worst fears are realized when Darktail arrives at the lake territories, hell-bent on destroying everything he loves.  What follows is an abbreviated recap of the first half of A Vision of Shadows from WindClan’s perspective: Onestar closes WindClan’s borders out of paranoia over Darktail; most of ShadowClan defects to Darktail’s Kin; the clans fail to defeat Darktail in battle; Darktail conquers RiverClan; SkyClan returns; Onestar tells the whole sordid tale of his history with Darktail; in the final battle, Darktail and Onestar both drown.  In StarClan, Onestar questions if he deserves to be there; Firestar assures him that despite his many mistakes, he was a good leader.

In past roundups, I have made no secret of my disdain for Onestar.  He can be an infuriating character to read; he’s arrogant, he harbors an unreasonably strong hatred for ThunderClan, and he’s seemingly allergic to making smart decisions.  However, as this Super Edition reminds us, Onestar wasn’t always like this; in early books, he was a good friend to Firestar, and he was usually characterized as a reasonable cat.  What changed?  The main series has never made it particularly clear.  The only time I can remember Onestar ever giving an actual explanation for his strange behavior is in Power of Three, when he leads WindClan into battle against ThunderClan for (seemingly) no good reason.  In his own words:

“How dare you?” Firestar roared.

[…]

Starlight glittered in Onestar’s eyes.  “We dare because we are true warriors,” he meowed evenly.  “This battle has been too long coming.  ThunderClan must learn that they are not the most important Clan in the forest.”

Firestar listened, still as a rock.

“You watch the suffering of others, waiting to be begged for help like you belong to StarClan.” Onestar lashed his tail.  “We will not beg.  We are warriors! We will fight for the prey and the territory we need to survive.” (Eclipse, pg.176-177)

This exchange has baffled me since the first time I read it.  If I’m understanding him correctly, Onestar doesn’t have any objective for this battle.  He doesn’t want to drive out ThunderClan, or seize any territory, or depose Firestar – he just wants to fight ThunderClan for the sake of fighting ThunderClan.  He’s practically using the Humiliate Rival casus belli from Europa Universalis IV.  We know from Thucydides that honor is a perfectly valid reason for war (along with fear and self-interest) but typically, battles in Warriors are fought with a less abstract purpose in mind (seize territory, depose a leader, drive out an enemy, etc.)  Honor alone hardly seems a strong enough reason to drive Onestar to such extremes; surely something else is at play here.

Somewhat understandably, then, I expected to leave this Super Edition with a better understanding of exactly why Onestar behaves so differently from Onewhisker.  It seems that the canon explanation truly is, as leader of WindClan, Onestar felt obligated to antagonize ThunderClan.  From his perspective, there have always been four clans, there must always be four clans, and because the clans are so culturally similar, the only way to ensure they remain separate is to ensure they are constantly at odds, even when there’s no good reason for it.  Personally, I think this is incredibly silly, but whatever – it’s believable enough.

The other thing I was really hoping for going into this Super Edition was some extra backstory on Darktail.  Unfortunately, Onestar’s Confession didn’t deliver.  Darktail shows up as a kit with Smoke, and later when he arrives at the lake territories with the Kin, but we don’t really get any information about what he was up to in between besides a bare “he was a bad dude” from the kittypets in the old forest territory.

The other weird thing about this Super Edition was how much it jumped around.  It follows Onepaw as an apprentice, before the Prophecies Begin; then, it skips to the beginning of the New Prophecy when the twolegs threaten the forest territories; then, it skips straight to Crowfeather’s Trial, completely skipping over Power of Three and Omen of the Stars.  I guess part of the problem is Onestar’s life has several time periods with potential for a Super Edition, but as is, most of this book is just recapping information we’ve already learned from the main series; the only portions that contain truly new material are the portion with Tansypaw/Brushpaw and Onestar’s trip back to the forest territories.  Honestly, I’d have preferred it if the authors made one of these two events the focus of the Super Edition instead of the A Vision of Shadows recap.

 I honestly wasn’t a huge fan of this Super Edition.  I was hoping to come out with a greater appreciation for Onestar, but I only came out bored.

Conclusion

Not a great batch of Super Editions this time.  Graystripe’s Vow was by far the best, and Leopardstar’s Honor was okay, but Onestar’s Confession was almost a total wash.  Here’s how I’d rank the Super Editions so far:

  1. Crookedstar’s Promise
  2. Tallstar’s Revenge
  3. Crowfeather’s Trial
  4. Squirrelflight’s Hope
  5. Graystripe’s Vow
  6. Bluestar’s Prophecy
  7. Hawkwing’s Journey
  8. Leopardstar’s Honor
  9. Moth Flight’s Vision
  10. Yellowfang’s Secret
  11. Tigerheart’s Shadow
  12. Bramblestar’s Storm
  13. Onestar’s Confession
  14. SkyClan’s Destiny
  15. Firestar’s Quest

We’re getting close to the wire here, folks. Next up: our last completed arc, A Starless Clan, then our last novellas and Super Editions.  Which clan will be the eponymous Starless Clan?  I hope it’s WarriorClan, but somehow, I doubt it…